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THE OVERCLOCKER
aus Offenbach/Hessen
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OC God
22 Jahre dabei !
Intel Core i7
3200 MHz mit 1.20 Volt
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hier ist mein Englisch Praktikumsbericht(9Klasse Realschule),es dient meiner Verbesserung der Note,ist freiwillig.
Es sollte so max. 2-3 Seiten sein(meins ist 2Seiten lang)
Nun wollte ich mal fragen ob hier Leudde da sind die vielleicht ein perfektes Englisch haben und vielleicht mal rüberschaun können und sagen können obs "OK" ist bzw. ob man was besser/verbessern kann.
Es ist --freiwillig--(nett das hier gemeckert wird) und es wär nett wenn ihr mir helfen könnt/wollt.
Ich danke jedem ! 
Ne Bewertung wär auch ganz lustig 
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My internship:
My internship was from the 20th March 2006-7th April 2006.
The first week I worked in a paint company names "Arta".
It is located in Obertshausen,near the Industry place.
They use paint and insulating materials.
I thought it will make a lot of fun,but it wasn´t so.
I started work at 7 am until 5 pm ,so it was a little bit more then I thought before.
I thought im going to manage the 3 weeks,so just did it ,but this time was just bad.
The first day I only tabulated letters and other things,only tabulate.
The days on the site wasn´t better.Only do one work,all the time.
I don´t learned and saw much and hadn´t any kind of fun so i left the company "Arta" on Friday the 24.March.
Now i had to find a new job in the next days.
My first idea was the electro market "Saturn" in Offenbach.
I called them and told them my story.
"It isn´t a problem,you can come on monday at 10 am"
This was a good news and I was happy that I found a job in this short time.
On Monday the 27th April started my new internship.
"Saturn" sells a lot of differnts electronic devices,so it became very funny.
I know a lot of these things ,so they allowed me to do many specific jobs.
For me, it was no problem to connect computers to each other or to do work like this.
They show me a lot of the company's business
How to work with the computer,how to order or reorder products and many more.
They trusted me,so I could serve customers,too, which was a good experince .
Specially by CDs and computers.
They customers saw that i know a lot about these things ,so they always were happy, and of course I was happy,too.
I enjoyed it to see them happy and to help and serve people.
Maybe sometimes I had "stupid" customers but it wasn´t often.
End: Friday 7th April
In these two weeks I worked hard and long, like a "real" shop assistent, but it was always fun and made me some savvier towards my future.
I didnt have any problems.My work mates were friendly,too,so it was fun all the time.
It was a good time !
The head was very happy about me and my time by "Saturn",so he said that i can choose exceptionally something for 50€.
My future plans are to sell or work with electronic products and work with peoples ,so i think the experiences at "Saturn" were imporant ones for my future.
(Geändert von THE OVERCLOCKER um 19:38 am April 26, 2006)
Gib mehr,um viel zu erreichen !
Gib alles um mehr zu bekommen......
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LieutenantDan
aus Mannheim
offline
OC God
23 Jahre dabei !
AMD T-Bred
2000 MHz
44°C mit 1.525 Volt
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Introduction of my practical training work
[ intership ] was from [occured hört sich ebsser an] the 20th March 2006-7th April 2006.
The first week[I worked] in a paint company name "Arta". [, near Obetrhausen's industrie place]...]
It is in Obertshausen,near the Industry place.
They work [use] paint and insulating materials.
I thougt it will make [it is] a lot of fun,but it wasn´t so.
[i started work at] 7 am and finished 5 pm ,so it was a more then i thought [before].
[I thought im going to manage the3 weeks, so [just did it] but it was a bad time in the first week. [but this time was just bad]
The first day i only tabulated letters and other things.
The days on the site wasn´t better. Only do one work,all the time.
I neither learn nor saw much and didnt have [hier weiß ich nicht., ob had hinmuss. eigentlich nicht, aber mein spracxhgefühl  ] any kind of fun so i left the company "Arta" on Friday, 24. of March.
Now i had to find a new job in the next days.
My first idea,was the electro market "Saturn" in Offenbach.
I called them and told them my story.
"It isn´t a problem,you can come on monday at 10 am"
This was a good news and i was happy that i found a job in this short time.
On Monday the 27th April i started my new practical training.
"Saturn" sells a lot of differnts electronic devices,so it became very funny.
I know a lot of these things ,so they allowed me to do many specific jobs.
For me, it was no problem to connect computers to each other or to do work like this.
They showed me a lot of the company['s business].
How to work with the computer,how to order or reorder products and many more.
They trusted me,so i could serve customers,too, which was a good experince .
Specially at CDs and computers.
They customers saw that i know a lot of these things ,so they always were happy, and of course i was happy too.
I love [ejoy, hört sich net so hocjhgedrungen an] to see them happy,to help and serve people.
Maybe sometimes i had "stupid" customers but it was very scarce. [kausal falsch...manchmal waren dumme besucher da, aber du warst sehr beängst? "so i was very scrary würdepassen "dadurch wurde ich sehr ägnstlich]
End: 7th April
In this two weeks i worked hard and long, like a "real" shop assistent, but it was always fun and made me some savvier towards my future.
I didnt have (wieder das had und have, wo ich mir ent 100pro sicher bin] any problem.My collegues were friendly,too, so it was fun all the time..
It was a good time !
The head [boss is so böse^^, oder auch "principal" oder "§director") was very happy about me and my time by "Saturn",so he said that i can choose exceptionally something for 50€.
My future plans are to sell or work with electronic products and work with peoples ,so i think the experiences at "Saturn" were imporant ones for my future.
(Geändert von THE OVERCLOCKER um 17:40 am April 26, 2006)
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i mach gleich weiter
[test] bedeutet, dass es besser wäre,muss aber net. falsches und unpassendes hab ich gleich geändert
Okay, hab mal dne ganzen text überarbeitet.
Sry, wenn ich viel von dienem rausgenommen.
Nach Rechtschreibung schau lieber nochmal.
mfg LtDan
Falls du noch fragen hats, kannst auch msn oder icq'en ,)
[die häufigsten fehler waren "by" statt "at", dann "hadnt" statt "didnt have", sonst reine Schönheits-Ausdruckskorrektur meinerseits]
(Geändert von LieutenantDan um 18:59 am April 26, 2006)
"Hosen unterm Ar*ch und die riesigen Shirts,
Cap schief Leute dachten wir wären psychisch gestört,
mit den ungeschnürten Schuhen und dem komischen Gang"
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